The One That Lets You Fly

Amazing. it is still a poem.
only thought is for this
"He makes your
heart speed up and"
i think you should take out the "and"
and i think you should change "he makes to "they make"
i think it just fits better with this if you do not specify the gender of "that one special person"

great write
5/5

Aww this was just beautiful. The love you expressed here was truly something I could relate with. The emotions were so real and I could tell came straight from the heart. You descriptions were just flawless.

"The one that cirlces your
thoughts before bed

Then dances around
your dreams the next second"
^beautifully said.

*5/5*

This was a pretty good poem. The spacing worked well for the storyline. I especially liked the last two lines and the repetitivity of "the one that". the first two lines are very good too. the detail is good and i like how you followed along, like when you said the one in your thoughts before bed and then in your dreams the next second. i give it a 5/5. <3

Cute. very inspiring poem. i would be proud to own that even if it didn't rhyme. 5/5 !props!

This is simply great. It is very amazing work. I love the way you express your emotion in this poem. I really love the forth and the fifth stanza. Well done job. 5/5