Wow this is excellent alot of emotions and easy to follow. i like the wording and it just flows so good. it does though sound like something out of a dream. but keep writing

I loved this poem so so so much. it was magical. i especially loved the first stanzas!!!
5/5

Wow really great poem girly! i loved the figurative language in it adding that really made the poem amazzing word choice to 5/5 definitely <33

Wow, very beautiful poem, I really love it. it's wonderful.

Oo feels so dreamy

*Carefully your fingertips touch my lips
Guiding them to an irresistible kiss...*
i thought that was part was just awsome. simple, but i dont know, i really liked it.
the [...] just make the reader linger for more. as if it could continue on forever.
5/5