This...is...amazing!!
so full of emotion and anger and pain
this is the kind of poetry i love...were you can actually feel what the writer is going through

i loved it

Saul,

Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.

Rebbeca

Saul,

Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.

Rebbeca

Saul,

Wow this is great. I loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of it. Just the feeling you get when you read it the feeling of realization of what it truly is like to be insane. Great work.

Rebbeca

Really nice work here. I can relate. It's almost like a story. Great work. Shanik

Saul,

Wow. this is amazing. It gives you the sense of being in that darkness and at that brink and edge. It's an amazing visualization! You've got a lot of potential if you continue to write like this!

5/5
Keep it up!
-Ally

P.S- Thank you for the comments of my poems.