Comments : I wish i could save you

  • 16 years ago

    by Tine

    Heey.. i like your style of writing, the realism in it is quite impressive. thx for the c on my poem.. x

  • Welcome thanks its my way of expressing my feeling

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I love your style. very very cool

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Good one 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Wow

    ^.^ I really like this one, that is like the best one I read all day, no joke ^^ I really liked it

    :Grabs peace of cardboard and holds up 5/5:

    woot woot! go you! Keep writeing your asomeness writeings ^^ ((sorry for the typos, broken keyboard XD))

  • 16 years ago

    by dark blue eyes

    Its so powerful...i love it. great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Madison

    Wow, this poem is awesome!!!! Keep it up!

    Love, Maddie