Comments : Homecoming Queen

  • 16 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Thats deep...

  • 16 years ago

    by jessie

    I thought you did a great job writing this keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Amazing write...i enjoyed reading it. it was
    very sad but an eye opener.

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    I had to keep reading the poem nice job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    I loved this poem truthfully... It was filled with emotion, and as I read this poem I felt it... That is a great thing... YES KEEP IT UP!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Wow this poem is amazing
    and it says so much
    my favotie part is She couldn't bare the pain that she wouldn't show, cuz i can relate to it so much
    great poem
    5/5

    --jess

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Damn...
    That was just so sad!! but I loved how you wrote it!! good work! it was very emotional!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    It so sad but so real at the same time. It's an excellent poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxLivxx

    Sad :[

    this is sooo well written and tells such a great story.

    but it almost made me cry!

    nice write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Thats sad but you did grat on it 100/100 :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by 0BrokenBella0

    I love this amazing poem. So deep. It's great. 5/5...would go higher if I could.

    <3 bella

  • 16 years ago

    by mILEENAlUVSdONALD

    Awwww

    soooo sweet and sad at the same time

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissy0590

    Wow nice poem i give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    That was wonderful.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    I've seen a bunch of suicide poems, and wrote quite a few myself, and this one was one of the best!
    You did a great great job!