Great choice of phrases and analogies. It flows realy well. Great style. 5/5

Very great understanding, very deep as well

Wow amazing poems so much emotion great poem

Amazing poem, I really liked it.

This poem called on all the senses, drawing the reader into it with each blood-soaked word. Very intense and unforgiving, this poem is quite the exquisite peice.

Brilliant poem, I love it, it is so intense and imagery is totally vivid.
You also have interesting choice of words, and I honestly enjoyed in every line.
You wrote this with elegant darkness, very well done. Bravo!

I love it.
The wording and rhyming were flawless.
Good job 5/5

Awww thats such a sad ending... luv the tittle

A really excellent poem, keep up the good work 5/5

That was amazing, very vivid, wonderful imagery. fantastic job. 5*5
Kimberly

Very creepy, love it. The ending was great and the "crawling through my skin" was really effective. Nice rhyme too. Wowee what a cool poem.

5/5

Em xXx

Dang this is on a whole other level than what most people can understand and i mean me lol. It was deep but dang lol. Great job. 5/5
-vino

Was readin through my comments n noticed u gave me a comment so i thought id return the favor
i really like ur stuff ur a great writer
especially this poem
gud job and keep writing
=)

That was good

Wow

Ooooh, excellent horror. A most enjoyable read.

Have read it serveral times - loved it,
It's worth editing to correct the punctuation,
It will become Perfect.

Stunning...from the title till the last letter of ur poem...I did like the way u wrote it..good job ,keep it up5/5

Hmm, Great meaning behind this poem. Tis very sad but yet it has a message in it that needs to be read. I loved this poem. Keep writting for you are a great poet. Never stop what you do.
5/5

I like it, it's really good.