This poem was beautiful yet so sad.
and the title fits it well.
you express yerself very good.
nice job!!
keep up the wonderful work.

One of my favorite songs has the same title, this is the main reason i decided to read this piece. Even though it is nothing like the song I am still glad that i read it. It is well written. it has a very clear voice and the emotion stands out well. I also like the way you drafted the story of it.