Patrik

About Patrik

Hi,

I would like a comment on my poems, as well as a vote. I'm here to improve myself as a 'poet', if I even can call myself that. All feedback is greatly appreciated:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

Profile of Patrik

  • Age : 18
  • Gender : Male
  • Country : Sweden
  • Joined : Jul 26, 2005
  • Last Visit : 18 years ago
  • Poems : 22
  • Comments : 86
  • Quotes : 1
  • Posts : 88
  • Awards :
    C

Latest Poems By Patrik

  • Realize that you're close to my heart,
    I'd do anything for you...

  • Sleepless, clueless, thinking again..
    Reminisce, think back, where you really that good...

  • Watch me unfold every piece of me,
    Are you really ready for what you're about to see...

  • You stand so tall,
    Watching me quietly...

  • Stop and wait,
    Let me understand...

Latest Quotes By Patrik

  • There is no shame in falling to the ground, but to just lay there.... that's a disgrace!

    18 years ago
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