Wow, you write with such grace ... which I admire almost as much as the poem itself.

A flawless piece, I found nothing wrong with it. And, the more I read it the more I fell in love.

This stanza;

"Am I to be that crimson maid, red flowers in her hair?
Soaked creepers bind,
Those souls entwined,
Though blank, I wish to care. "

is amazing. I absolutely loved it - perfect ending, perfect wording, perfect everything.

Keep it up darling.