Biya ( F P C )
And this inspired me alot really ...Whoever wrote this its really lovely
Goth marionette ( F P C D )
The poem is fantastic..I read it twice..It was not long but it was emotional..
I enjoyed reading it..
Keep up the good work plz
gIrL ( F P C D )
The poem is so amazing, this must be a really amazing writer the one who wrote it
Lonely Rider ( F P C D )
Hey karan... this is beautiful...
simply amazing... it really touched my heart...
"Have we ever parted?
Or was it either never stayed
Was there a goodbye from the distance?
Before the heart was slayed."
^^ I felt as if step by step you are disclosing your pain... slowly and silently...
"As I routinely face this question and answer nightmare"
^^ this really toched my heart strings...
1gray1 by grace ( F P C D )
Beautifully written poem. No cliches. Sadly projected. Opening line says so much without actually saying ......... Last line I for one can totally relate to. How many times and to how many people does this happen ...... finding answers which are but nightmares.......sublime.
Emma ( P )
Wow, it's really good! I love your choice of lexis. Very emotional, well done xxxx
JYOTI RANA ( F P C )
Today i ready your peoms and quotes. every sad this make me also sad.
jane kyo esa hota hai jo pyaar mein hota hai rota hai. phir bhi jane kyo vo jita hai, shayad esi liya pyaar hota hai.
best of luck