Comments : Take My Fate

  • 15 years ago

    by Sweetdream

    I really liked this! in fact i like your style, short and simple, i think the choppy feel makes your points sharper!

  • 15 years ago

    by Robbiez EMO Heart and Soul

    Does this mean anything? should i be worried?

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    Liked the end, with the clever rhyming, but it was too choppy for me. And couldn't grab my attention.