You know what while im reading this im thinking the dreamland. Hahaha
im n0t good commenter but this is n0t a l0ve poem but i l0ve this piece. Keep it up

First let me say thank you for reading and commenting on my poem of faith.I'm glad to know that it is reaching so many who still have a part of their hearts set on our Lord and savior Jesus Christ.

Your poem has touched my heart and brings a tear to my eyes simply because in it I could see that there is an abundant of pain, hurt, and confusion in your life.

Old wounds open
When the pain feels it will succumbs you eternally
Am I really a part of me?

This stanza tells me that there is many things in your life that you have suppressed over a period of time and suddenly gushes out so much that you question your existence.

Every day life goes on
But i'm still enraptured, overcome, distraught
By a love that was
Once really not

Of course, life will go on but if we do not realese the heavy burden resting on our minds, we will forever be trapped.
I know it's hard to move on after a friendship or a relationship failed especially if that relationship was on false pretense.

I will skip the other stanzas as i'm pressed for time( Working) and will get to the last one which I think is very important as the others.

Both of me finally pull apart and live distantly
Still, i'm forever lost in the dreamland
soaked and bloody, everything comes at me at once
No one dares to take my hand.

Well my friend I have to say this.There is one person who is always willing to take our hands and comfort us in our darkest moments, but, you have to invite him in your heart.
He is the one that when you wipe away a tear, at the said time he is wiping his for he knows your suffering and he cares, but won't intrude for he knows you have a mind of your own.
I'm glad that you commented on my poem which lead me to yours and though sad, you,ve expressed your deep emotions very well.
I will read more as time permits.
Take care and do have a wonderful and safe day/evening.
Paul Anand Singh.