Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-27
Sad love poem. I know the feeling of longing and waiting all to well. It can be the longest time of our lives. Well done.
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-28
Waiting for all to fall in place & set things
right in life can take for ages..the yearning of
it is heavy & unbearable..a sad write.
Take care
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-28
A poem of deep longing and patience. It touched me deeply, I can relate to every word. I think most people can . Loved is sista . Beautifully done
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-30
I feel like a good teacher haha. I saw some phrases I have used in my poem 'Downpour of Daydreams' .. I'm honored. (: I almost think you wrote a better poem than me. A wonderful poem from you my dear.
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-31
I just interpreted it different I suppose... sorry I was wrong.
Lady Nik ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-31
I remember that. I had to read that in school. Even though this was a sad pice, I found beauty in your words. You told this story well and I think it's very creative. Nik
Surviving By A Cut ( F P C )
at 2009-11-01
This is very good work :)
5/5
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