Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-29
How sad this poem is, really hard losing a parent rather in death or walking out on the family. This reached into the heart and stirred emotions as a good poem should ..Awesome
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-29
This could have been written by my son and I am sure he has had the same thoughts as this. Well done.
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-30
Oh my goodness... this poem so touched my heart. You have a way of portraying your emotions in your poems that just draw the reader in... and strike a chord . A sad poem that you have so well written. Excellent.
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-30
This is so sad, yet again.. absolutely heartbreaking. I'm sorry if this is personal and from real life...nobody should ever have to go through that. Another sad write, but with the emotion..the reader couldnt stop reading. Well done!
Em ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
This is very straight forward and very heartbreaking, many of us have only one parent, some, no parents in our lifes. wonderful choice of words, 5/5. Em
Baby Rainbow ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-19
Excellent poem, very touching with your words and the topic is a touching topic.
well done xx
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