Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-29
Wow, this brought tears to my eyes.
Especially the part where you said you must be damaged. Funny how we will blame our selves when people walk out on us. Question our ability to keep someone happy
I love your style , flow and tone of each poem.
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-29
This is so very sad that you can feel it as you read. Someone loves you and that is God. He is always with you no matter what. Someday someone will see your good qualities and be there for you.
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-30
A very sad write that touched my heart. Your emotions can be felt. Very well written and expressed. I love the style of your poems too. An excellent piece... well done.
Lady Nik ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-30
Aww such a sad piece. I can tell you wrote this from the heart. It seems so pure and powerful. I think it flowed well and was easy to understand. A very deep and emotional poem. Keep it up hun :) Nik
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-30
This is so heartbreaking, your words were emotion-packed with sadness and loneliness. I think many of us have been in your position numerous times in our lives, but with patience, that right person will fill the empty space in our heart...but only if we are patient. Sad write, but I can totally see where you are coming from. I hope some lady comes into your life soon, I'm sure you deserve it. Well done, great flow, emotion, everything.
Surviving By A Cut ( F P C )
at 2009-11-01
Amazing poems!
Words I couldn't say!
You described my life! lol
10/5
I'm always left out and never wanted and that's why I have anger problems which they would know if they cared enough
Again great write!
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