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Sylvia A ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-01

Not sure if this is about a death of a person or the death and loss of a love affair. Either way it gives the reader a choice to decide for themselves. Well done.

Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-01

Very sad but so well written and thought out.
Good indeed as always Gerard

Lady Nik ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-01

Wow...talk about amazing imagery. This was a wonderful piece and so well written. I felt so much sadness when I read this, but your imagery is flawless. A very nice poem dear. Keep it up :) Nik

Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-01

This was really good, I couldnt believe how wonderfully it was written. I felt as though I was in this person's position. Sad write but one of the best Ive read from you.

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