Tammi ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
This is a very powerful poem and it tells of ur story sad and true for so many girl have to face this everyday not just u and I know u will b ok and hope u get the help u need to get past this and I know it will not b easy 5/5
Tammi,
schizophrenic ( P C )
at 2009-11-05
With a smile i pretended to be somebody else.
But its at the stage im losing hope,
Im giving up, i cant seem to cope.
no comment cause it was a poem and comment it self , 5/5
Snuggle Bear ( F C D )
at 2009-11-05
Wow!! i didn't know you were going through this love :( it's a great poem, one of your best i'd say, but so sad to read coz i care about you so much. i love the flow and great word choice, i hope you can get better and want to do it for yourself, because you are a great girl and i want you to heal :) 5/5 because it's so relatable and so well written
take care xxxx
Courtney ( F C )
at 2009-11-05
But you all listen, but you dont hear,
And you may watch, but you dont see,
So im going to make it very clear....
I HAVE DEPRESSION AND ITS KILLING ME.
This is the best part in the whole poem the flow was way perfect and it gets a 5/5
DoYouKnowHowMuchIHurt ( F P C )
at 2009-11-06
Wow, that was sad hon. good job though. 5/5 always. best writer. ox love you. stay strong.
xXHunnyGurlXx ( P C D )
at 2009-11-09
This was a very strong poem... The flow was great & your wording was done quite well it was a little of beat in a few places but if red in a certain flow it didnt show too much.
I really enjoyed it.
wishing you the best hun xx
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