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CY GINDLE ( F P C ) at 2009-11-07

Awesome flow. perfect actually. this piece
just keeps flowing from one word to the next
rhyming is really good too . I wish I could
keep a poem singing like you do 5/5
as far as the content we all live with regrets
the secret is to learn from our mistakes
and try to not do it again. One of my quotes
applies here < only a fool breaks its own
heart>

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