Weapons ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
Very apologetic, and sincere... piece of writing you came up with here. I really hope that you were forgiven.. I like this poem, i know sometimes we make mistakes, and hurt the people we care about.... you just gotta redeem yourself.. I like the last line....
"That I have nothing left to lose"
....I'd like to say something about that...
you have nothing left to lose,
but everything to gain. :)
sad write..
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-05
Lies must be a big issue in your life. The last two poem have been very explicit on how they effect one.
I love the honesty in your poems, the complete opening up to what others may not want to face or hear.
Great job, creative, simple, powerful
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