Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
An interesting poem but enjoyable. Creative and to the point. well done :]
Weapons ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
Ehh sad poem definitely. bein scared of disapproval is something that I can relate to, also the lying part, pretending cuz you don't want to be left behind to pay for your mistakes by the people you want to care, sucks to know that if you are honest that the people you love wont show love..
buut anyway this is a good poem.... keep writin.... :)
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