Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-05
You guys rock :] Beautifully done with images that shouted through the words. Awesome :]
The Poetic Child ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-05
Wow. pure amazing
lovely write!
definetly a tru master piece
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Very well written and I could see a framed
picture hanging on the wall which speak
voulmes..good write!
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Awesome... just awesome you too! Beautiful flow, rhyme in this piece and words that just create vivid images :) Loved it! Very well done to you both :)) Lol.
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Very nice, you two did a wonderful job on this collab. Really cannot tell who wrote what. If we could only suspend the past and live for the present and future. Well done.
Lady Nik ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Wow! What a powerhouse collab this was. You two should be very proud because this was brillant. I love the first stanza. You two did a great job with this. It seems so whole and flows very nicely. Nik :)
My Sisters Keeper ( C D )
at 2009-11-07
I found myself feeling this poem as I read it. You made me think too. I enjoyed the read and cannot fault you
5/5
Jenna Davies
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