Bad Habits Die Hard ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
I really liked this poem especially the last two lines of the 3rd stanza
Burn the nerves till nothing's there,
destroying truth beyond repair.
But I don't know why I think the last line would have been better with cannot instead of can't.
Burn the nerves till nothing's there,
destroying truth beyond repair.
Distorting minds of what is real,
to the point where we cannot feel.
GoodbyeMyAlmostLover ( F P C )
at 2009-11-08
I really liked this poem, the flow was great and so was the rhyme. great job 5/5
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