paige
at 2009-11-07
That was great:)
I loved:
Topaz eyes with rusty glass shards.
Razorblade's kiss left a trail of dark scars.
Kuro ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-10
Bravo! every stanza was rhymed brilliantly and the flow was flawless. and to top it all off, you used excellent vocabulary. none of the rhymes seemed forced. everything just fit together so perfectly.
i'm a sucker for sad poetry. you really have done an outstanding job here. 5/5
~Ben
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