Comments - Angels cant exist

Max ( F C D ) at 2012-04-06

Hi guys anyone who would visit my post i k its not much of a poem and its my first one and English isn't my main language, so if it wont bother u would u leave a comment with what u do like about it and leave a tip on how to make it better thanks =)

Xanthe ( F P C D ) at 2012-04-07

I really liked the beginning.. But, honestly, I was kind of confused by how you ended it.. If she broke your heart time and again, why'd you think she's an angel? Perhaps it's because she's beautiful? or she has the voice of an angel?.. For me, it would've been a great piece, considering English isn't you're main language (nor is it mine) but the ending was confusing. And I think this should be categorized in the 'sad poem' as it ended really sad and hopeless..

-X

Max ( F C D ) at 2012-04-08

Well thanks but the last i meant to write 'u proved that angels can never exist' but guess i forgot never

Rihanna Babez ( F P C D ) at 2012-04-11

Awww this is sad

Great write
Like it
5/5

crishmerl ( F P C D ) at 2012-04-18

Yeah angels sometimes come and sometimes go...but there is a real angel that will come in a right time and a right way....maybe, you think they never exist... well, destiny can only answer it...

I feel the emotion you feel in this poem...

Georgia ( F C ) at 2012-04-23

Sad and written with great, clear emotions. Another 5/5 :3

Jenn ( F P C ) at 2012-04-24

Angels in this world are far and few between...
The only people that come close are the people we love, and even those are far from perfect.

I like this poem, I understand it... I've lived it.

5/5
Jenn


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