Comments : So I'm to dream

  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    "Bedroom blues
    A toast to the loners shoes"
    I love how your draw the whimsy into this poem even if it's in a sad sort of way...
    "Pondering the scent you left on my pillow again
    Don't outstay your welcome"
    ...and then plug in an almost painful (not to read, I mean in the sense it makes you feel) emotional kind of aspect. Your poetry combines the folly of imaginative writing with the harsh day-to-day realities. This contrast is one of the things I love so much about your poetry and is what draws me to read more. Great poem, the ending made me reflect on life. :)