Comments : Anyone listening

  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    This poem makes me feel like hyperventilating for some reason. In the best way possible because it was and is an amazing poem. Great job, it was a lovely read. :)

    • 10 years ago

      by Misundertood

      Ha thanks I guess someone is listing. HA!

  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Of course I am. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Smaccams

    I absolutely adore this. This is great! You took my pointers and it bloody well worked out! I love it. It's smooth, it flows and I love the repetition of the pale blue light - it really sets the scene.

    A nice, sweet poem; good job :)

    • 10 years ago

      by Misundertood

      Thanks again I owe it all to you for the help and inspiration.

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This poem seems so simple when you first look at it, then you get to reading it, and suddenly, there is a much deeper meaning. This is a really good poem! Keep writing!

  • 10 years ago

    by Fires Fade

    Nice poem, I love the fact that it was short and straight to the point.

  • 10 years ago

    by Darren

    Nicely written, very tight with a good rhyming scheme.

    I like how this poem conjures images as you read and I especially enjoy how this can be read at only lightning pace.

    great job.

  • 9 years ago

    by misty lott

    Its not something most teens dont feel expecially after an abusive life