Comments : What Happened...

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This poem !made me cry.. I just lost a friend because she committed suicide so this poem really hit heart.

    • 10 years ago

      by Liam Lambie

      I feel your pain. I lost an old friend on Thursday who sadly took her own life. This Poem is for (about) her.
      Breaks my heart to think she was so low and felt like she couldn't reach out to anyone.

      So many questions that I suppose will never be answered... I'm deeply sorry to hear about your loss too...

      I hope your friend has now found the peace she was searching for. x

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This poem hits home for me as well.. These are the many questions that run through your mind when you hear of a friend or loved one that takes their own life.. truly heartbreaking.

    On the technical side of things, your rhyme flow is very nice.. lovely form.

    • 10 years ago

      by Liam Lambie

      Thank you so much Maple Tree. x