Woooft! I can't believe no one has commented on this one, I can't believe I don't read more of your work! You have made me comment from my phone, which is something I NEVER do.

This poem is so creativ! I love hour word uses, and the odd words that I had to google (thanks)

Straight away I felt a tone of sadness, low self esteem, because you felt the sunshine did not belong to you, that you should not have had it. It made me wonder what would have been possible for you to earn it, if anything?

The following stanzas are equally filled with emotion, and I get a sense of an inner battle with yourself, depression and esteem. The imagery of the branches and the night sky with the moon, so vivid and clear, and again just fits with the tone.

Good flow, structure, and a great title choice for your poem. Nice work Guinea pig xx