Comments : Paheli

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Hehe, I like the format.. I wish I knew what It means.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes I wish I knew what this means too. Maybe a translation would be nice at the bottom but gathering from it I say it has got something to do with the current situation you are undergoing. Take care.

    • 9 years ago

      by Jyoti Rawat

      .....Riddle
      .......... of your name
      .............................. on my hand
      ....I don't want
      ....................your name
      ....................................on my hand

      ......I cut
      ...............one bye one
      ............................... .All lines
      ............................................those are on my hand

      For removing
      ...................your name
      ..................................from my hand

      ......don't want
      ......................to become riddle
      ...............................................to made/get you mine

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is new. Never read anything like it & its good. very nicely structured & expressed.

    all the best & take care