Comments : Prayer

  • 9 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    There is much pain in your poem! as short as it is, it has a powerful message, but try to rhyme is, and write more about it.. you got potential

  • 9 years ago

    by Abed

    So much in a few words.
    Ah.

  • 9 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Death, is never the best option. Within every scar, healing dwells.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brilliant little piece. That death would come so quickly for everyone - a short but powerful write,
    All the best
    Ben