Comments : In Between Love <3

  • 9 years ago

    by favi

    My first online poem :) hope you guys like it:)

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Capitalize the word "I" it makes it look a good deal better hun I like the raw emotions in this piece though hope you heal hun

    -Bet

    • 9 years ago

      by favi

      Thank u for your good advice