This is a really powerful and beautiful acrostic poem! The title reading down the side of the poem is very pretty, one of the many poetry forms I adore actually..

I would like to give you an idea you can try if you wish.. Acrostic poems read beautifully in the way you format it... here is a format idea:

Oh! my people

Come back

To me your Creator

Often do I call

But you failed my calls

Every second i am

Ready to give you.....

total freedom, only if you are ready.
{from your dearest maker}

give a few spaces apart for your ending lines so the reader can see October- also seconds should be second.

Just a format idea- Either way, I really enjoyed this poem, Beautiful!!