Comments : I can't talk to nobody

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    This is awesome. I really enjoyed the expression of oneself throughout the entire poem. You really did a fantastic job by illustrating to the reader how a poem can give you comfort and meed. The fight within yourself and the battle around your life is shown throughout the poem as well, it's like a build up of negativity but once you grab that pen and put it to paper the calm and peace you find is indescribable. Really well written, and powerful and magical piece.

    • 9 years ago

      by britanny

      Thank you so much for the feedback makes me happy. and thats what people say that i can give them comfort through out the whole poem and that some people can feel the sadness from me into their hearts. thanks for reading and im glad that someone else likes it

  • 9 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Good write. Life is always an interesting topic. Keep it up, like what you did here.