I feel there is a lot more pain, anger and distrust behind this write. I also like the title "costumes are slipping" for
it shows/peels away the true colors behind the nature of a person. A sad write that everyone can understand and have gone through...take care.

Wow. This poem really moved me... I could relate to everything you've expressed here. It's so painful to realize the one person you thought you could trust, is actually the person you shouldn't. I'm sorry if you really are going through this!

I love the first two lines of this poem... we always seem to get deceived by the eyes... you mention how sweet this person's eyes are, yet you never realized how deceitful they were. I feel like many people can relate to that.

I like the simplicity of this poem... you clearly expressed how disappointed you are in this person... you trusted him or her, despite your defensive walls.

Well done with this poem!

I forgot to mention that I love the title! It's a perfect fit for this poem.