Comments : Unheard love

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Powerful.
    This seeps out emotion.
    I could easily relate to this poem.
    I would suggest breaking up the stanza's but other than that this poem has it all.
    Heart, feeling, pain, many different emotions which were penned in this piece.
    Somber write.
    5/5