Comments : Chains

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Powerful poem with an amazing pull on the reader. Strong emotions you were able to make the reader feel these feelings you have put down on paper. The somber tone is deep and aching. It is oozing out with such heartbreak and pain. Love the rhyming style and the words you have used to capture these thoughts and feelings.
    5/5