Comments : Behind The Mirror

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This poem shows deep emotion. For sadness can last for years and we might not always know it, but then it hits us hard and it's difficult to overcome. Mirrors can definitely be our worst enemy. We always fight a war with ourselves and lose because we cannot cope with what we have become. Mirrors show a reflection of our true self most of the time. Between now and the past we grow and so does our pain a lot of the time. I like how this story unfolds though. It was wonderful. I believe you are talking about where you are and how you miss the girl you used to be. But the girl inside of you is trying to escape from the depression and just cannot anymore.

    On the very last line insider should be inside. Otherwise great poem!

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Beautiful saffie*