Comments : And no-one's crying

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Damn ...this is a chilling, stunning and intense poem.it's kind of sad that things like this actually happen, people lie and make empty promises etc bit they never keep them and at first you don't care, it doesn't hurt, but then you meet one person, and your whole life changes...a beautiful poem Jean ;-)

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    It seems there is always that ONE person who changes our whole perspective on things.. on life. The one person who makes us feel like we actually do have something to lose. And you wonder what the hell it is about that person that makes us so weak, so desperate for them to stay.

    I think, like me, some people will be able to relate to the realness of this poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Amazing.Excellent.Fantastic.Superb.Superb. Fabulous.Wonderful.
    My mind cannot think of anymore describing words to describe this awesomely written poem.
    From the very first line.... "Abandon me, my love, and join the club." I couldn't take my eyes off it.I wanted to know what would you say next.
    Generally all the sad poems I have read start with an extremely sad line but here I felt as if you were challenging this person to leave you too.Your sad poem did not start off with that tear filled tones.....but instead told that you didn't care about these people anymore so even this other person can leave you just like others and that will not affect you.I loved loved loveeddddd this wonderful start of yours.

    I also loved how you took this no caring attitude of your poem to a very sad touchy one.

    The only word I can right now think of to describe this wonderful poem is ;
    Wwwwoooooowwwwwwwwww.
    5/5