Comments : Almost Believable

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Oh saffie, your poems have been so sad lately, I am so sorry for your loss. This person seemed to be your one true love. He was your protector of your heart. And kept you safe from any harm that this world could have cost you. A dragon is also a nice comparison. That tells me he was fearless and before he passed away would protect you at all costs. Now you feel like you will never be able to move on from him. Thank you for sharing. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    This is such a beautiful poem saffie... I'm loving it...

  • 9 years ago

    by Zabadak

    Beautiful imagery, Saff!

    Well constructed, and easy to empathise with!

    Devastating content! I know you still hurt! Wish you could heal and move on, still remembering this special time and person!