Very nicely written. Great job!!

Theres always pieces that in first read, just grabbed you.. this one knocked me over!

You have the ability to hit me hard with your words and that is one of the many reasons why I adore your poetry.

to hold that moment, seize the moment of a lingered memory is priceless, even if it means waking up to reality of being alone. Losing the one you love through death, or abandonment or just life circumstances shatters the soul... this piece got me Saffie... truly got me.. damn :-(