Comments : Think Less...

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh wow I love your rhyming... And your starting lines were beautiful...

    I guess many many people, I believe mostly girls, live this routine and it must be so heart breaking. Faking smiles and forcing laughter is really hard although it seems easy.

    This was a really touching and sad poem.
    It is a horrible life when one falls asleep and wakes up crying but still has to pretend that everything is normal and fine.

    I loved the entire poem but truly, I loved this line the most:

    'And wipe away the tears before they become a stream'

    I also loved the title of this poem.. According to me there could have been no better title to it. :-)
    When you think less you ought to forget the pain faster. Someone has rightfully said:
    The key to happiness is bad memory.

    If you are going through all this, I'm sorry. Things will get better soon. :-)

    Wonderful write