I've read this about five times and each time all I can think is WOW.

I agree with the above comment, have read this multiple times other than WOW and Amazing! I'm not sure what else to say lol

Andrea, this has left me speechless, one of your best poems within this genre, I can't agree any less with my felloew p and q rs above.

already out of votes, but Monday aint that far :O
brilliant piece of art

Syrup.....you know that i love your writing, so im sure you know what i mean when i say.......OMGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!

You smashed the granny out of this write!!!

Simply amazing!