You have the imagery and raw emotion down as a poet. I Respect that as a poet myself.

Loneliness sucks.. I apologize for you having to go through solitude such as that and for that my heart aches. I understand.

-Darclyfe-
5/5

This is an amazing write. I love the way you capture every detail and make the reader see it and feel it as if he were the one there. Being alone sucks lol. But I love this piece great job! 5/5

*~BrittBratt~*