Comments : Vividly Breaking

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Captivating, I couldn't wink until I was through with this poem. You have something so special and unique with words. I haven't read but 3 poems by you so far but I am wondering why I never came across your work.

    This poem is honestly crafted like a beautiful portrait.
    Well structured and well expresssed.

    very original !

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you so much for your kind words. It's fun that it felt like a portrait, that was essentially exactly what I wanted it to be. I tried to capture the vastness of the experience I had when I first saw Ravel's Boléro being performed. The main dancer left me anxious in a way that was so pleasant that I felt empty when it had ended. Even ages later I can hear the music from that performance almost like a hallucination whenever I remember it.

      I think I failed though. Now in hindsight I think that I'm not mature enough in my writing to truly capture it yet.