I've read this poem twice now, and it has something that just keeps me caught... I really cannot tell you what it is that I love about this poem cause truthfully even I don't know. All I just know is that I love this poem and it is written beautifully.

I love your choice of words. I especially love your description of fireworks. The way you have described it is wonderful. Just love this:

'rapidly flying forward
and ending in a climax
that lights up the night
just for a moment'

Its beautiful. Really beautiful.
Keep writing :-)

I freakin love the title and ending stanza...
this poem really makes me think off feeling numb
and how you could do more damage that way
rather than feeling pain. this flows nicely in my head
and it's filled with so much despair emotions
but somehow gives a hopeful vibe

nick work.. keep writing