Comments : Where are you?

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    The author has put their emotions right into the heart of this poem and opened up their vulnerable heart to show how much they long for that love and protection from the one they love, and who should love them. There was an ease of read to this poem, and something about it made me read it several times. Very truthful account of what it feels like to be so lonely and long for something we once had.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Okay, TA, I have to stop here for a while. I would love to browse over your poems but my heart is completely torn into pieces. It was a rewarding decision that I browsed through your profile. I have read a lot of sad pieces, but I have to say it's amazing how you write with the same consistent sadness in every piece, no, even more sad piece by piece. This poem just shattered my already lonely heart as of the moment. Your raw and subtle approach is just brilliant, TA.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Okay, TA, I have to stop here for a while. I would love to browse over your poems but my heart is completely torn into pieces. It was a rewarding decision that I browsed through your profile. I have read a lot of sad pieces, but I have to say it's amazing how you write with the same consistent sadness in every piece, no, even more sad piece by piece. This poem just shattered my already lonely heart as of the moment. Your raw and subtle approach is just brilliant, TA.