Comments : Upon Angel's Wings

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Another touching poem on the same person yet with different expressions, only shows how much you are touched by this loss.

    I love this poem equally, your rhyming schemes are just perfect, the simplicity in your expressions makes every word genuine.

    There is a tone of dedication and grief. I was mostly touched and moved by this stanza, it was very sad;

    I know that if it was your choice
    We'd feel your touch and hear your voice
    As one journey ends and another one starts
    Until we meet again, you live on in our hearts

    ^

    I think those who are gone would definitely try to show us signs that they are still there by one way or another.

    Thanks for sharing.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A moving write and from reading this I can understand
    how much this person means to you and the importance played
    in your life. As the verse unfolds so does the heavy sadness.
    Nice use of rhymes and at the same time saying what you feel...take care