This is just Brilliant! your thought of playin on words, Dae and Day, was just brilliant.

A very sad poem, I am always overwhelmed by poems speaking of human loss.

You did so well expressing your emotions, the scheme was nailed and so was the flow.

Your last two lines summing up who he is and wht he meant, each of you have lost a role he played yet mutually lost this person and what he meant.

May his soul rest in peace, this was a great poem to read. Sorry for your loss.