Comments : Hailstorm

  • 9 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    She loathed the very idea of beauty,
    and caused a shift in its meaning
    when she created hailstorms of rubies
    with every flap of her failing wings.

    ^^^ I love this part (: Great job (:

    --- MKKK

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Gripping poem which speaks volumes of emotions. This is quite a raw poem, taken fro that dark place where have all travelled and feel like there is no escape from, and Kakera has shown this dark place using a mix of creative wording, and honest emotions straight out.

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you for your kind words, dear. :>