Comments : Twin Rainbows

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I loved how dark and how sad this poem was from starting line to ending line, truly beautiful! I couldn't stop reading this poem and it's now going to go in my favorite poems list. What I found the most amazing part of all was the title because I never would've twisted something so light and sweet into something dark and sad, but that's what makes people different how they can change something ordinary and make it extraordinary, truly impressed with the talent of different poets!
    Also I nominated it, it was just that beautiful in my mind. 5/5

    -Moria Bella Bair

    • 8 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you kindly for your generous words. I'm very happy to hear that you liked this piece so much! Your comment on the title itself is also very thought provoking for me as a person and as a writer, because it begs the question of why I am able to twist a title like this one when you believe you wouldn't/couldn't.

      I think the answer would probably be profoundly woven into the essence of what it means to be human itself. And more specifically how we perceive the world. I believe I can write the way I do because I don't see the world in colours anymore, but in shades of grey. Figuratively, of course. To me, I think that the light and the dark has become the same entity, a two-faced God. Maybe that's why I can't seem to write happy poems anymore.

      But who knows. Thank you, again, for your comment. <3